She says im different from any guy
How can she be so positive
Im the stalker being stalked nearby
We are good at taking but have yet to give
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She gives up everything such a risk taker Shes a wingless angel a forsaker Im her mirror man a guiltful heartbreaker When she shatters ill be Achilles her puzzle boy Ill nice simple poem and good images of story
This poem has excellent imagery, but it could be tightened up in some parts. Not bad, but you're capable of much more. Push the boundaries, call her a dumbB: D