Another View Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Another View

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if i could afford the world
a view of another world
through my verses like the
ocean that hides yet magnifies
a world so glorious of its own -

freewheeling corals, zizagging fishes,
multihued starfishes, shells that grant
the ocean a contest of geometric elegance
giant meditative clam that turns out a luxurious
ochreous pearl impervious to the pounding waves
a monk zooming on zero desires for nirvana -

my life as a poet would have been well rewarded

the rainbow the sun never fails
to illuminate in the fall of heavenly
sweats and tears

Sunday, August 27, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean,rainbow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patricia Gale 27 August 2006

A beautiful read, peaceful and the imagery shines. Loved it

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***** ********* 27 August 2006

I hope one day John, to be able to look and see as you do! the pure beauty of the world instead of my blinkered dark past. A wonderful poem of hope and fantastic imagery of what the free thinking poet can give the reader. I love it John, it is one of your best imo. Smiling at you, Tai

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john tiong chunghoo

john tiong chunghoo

Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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