Saturday, April 25, 2020
April Sunlight On Lake Water Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Dancing on their embarkations,
triangular-arrowheads enter the water
dispersing a blinding light, shimmering-
like a thousand fish mouths opening,
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Dominic Windram
25 April 2020
Excellent poem Mark..replete with vivid imagery. It's a 10 from me!
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1/15/2026 3:09:00 PM # 1.0.0
There is an open jarred cavity in us all An eternal eye that sees entirely-everything, /// introspective feelings; well written
Much obliged for the comments today Mahtab, thank you.