Fatemeh Tarkashvand


Are You Yet Proud? - Poem by Fatemeh Tarkashvand

How can you call us, your best creature?
While we are wilder than wilds in nature
How are you proud of this human?
While they know nothing but killing women
Some of us guilty, the rest are silent
History says that, it is our talent
How can they make a body to pieces?
They do even kill nephews and nieces
They are the man of blood and horror
They cook died body for his poor mother
They are against culture and history
Destroying them is counted as victory
Never I believe, you let them to live
As a human, what they do achieve?
Oh my dear God! Are you yet proud?
Sure you are not! But, don’t say it aloud

Topic(s) of this poem: god


Poet's Notes about The Poem

In Quran –Muslim’s book- God says that human is his best creature and also he says he is the best creator
As I know God sent 124000 prophets to guide people but yet we are making weapon and kill each other hundred times wilder than animals.
I wonder are we his best creature yet? Is he proud of us yet

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/19/2017 12:56:00 AM)


    How can they make a body to pieces?
    They do even kill nephews and nieces
    They are the man of blood and horror
    They cook died body for his poor mother..... ohhhhhhhh terrible is this world....... you are portraying a true world in which such terrible things happen...... thank you dear poetess for your cry to this miserable and cruel world. tony
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  • Ernest Makuakua (1/14/2016 5:47:00 AM)


    HMM EMOTION IN THIS PIECE AND TRUTH YOU SAID IT COULDN'T SAY IT BETTER HOW CAN HE BE PROUD INDEED. HE FORGIVES BECAUSE HE KNOWS BETTER THAN US YET WE HURT ONE ANOTHER I LOVE THE POEM
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    Are You Yet Proud? - Poem by Fatemeh Tarkashvand
    How can you call us, your best creature?
    While we are wilder than wilds in nature
    How are you proud of this human?
    While they know nothing but killing women
    Some of us guilty, the rest are silent
    History says that, it is our talent How can they make a body to pieces?

    THANKS FOR SHARING
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/11/2015 10:03:00 AM)


    we are wilder than wilds in nature
    How can they make a body to pieces?
    They cook died body for his poor mother

    sooo cruel but true. this happens. We shall pray to Almighty God. you have described it well . thank you. liked this poem very much because it moved me to tears. tony
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  • (9/10/2015 11:38:00 AM)


    Wow! Very intense and truthful poem, some evil people use their free will to go against God even, they are lower than the beasts, killing, raping, torturing, they need to be put to death, so God can reign again with only the goodness of mankind and humanity. Excellent poem! Kept me spellbound as I read it. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 9, 2015



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