Fatemeh Tarkashvand

Rest In Pece - Poem by Fatemeh Tarkashvand

Aylan death affected me alot. I don’t know English literature that much to say a poem but I said what came to my heart.

Go and never look back again
Aylan be sure there is no more pain
Forgive us we don’t have any eyes
Or we are not that much yet wise
To built a place for you to play
Choosing paradise was the best way
There is nobody to stop beheading
We are making gun still for killing
We help to the beast to be more cruel
Happy you to leave this world without rule
Go and rest in peace, in God’s arms dear
There is no mother to fade your fear

Topic(s) of this poem: death

Form: Free Verse

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Aylan a tree year old kid died in Turkey shore. He was seeking somewhere safe to live and found it in God's arms

Comments about Rest In Pece by Fatemeh Tarkashvand

  • (1/13/2016 6:20:00 PM)

    condolence may you muster
    lots of strength from expressing
    your sorrow in poems
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  • pouya Rezanejad (12/15/2015 6:39:00 AM)

    I am so proud that one of my compariots wrote this poem
    Please read my poems and tell your ideas about them
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (10/7/2015 4:23:00 AM)

    Choosing paradise was the best way
    There is nobody to stop beheading
    We are making gun still for killing.. very touching poem. sadness, reality of life on earth.. somber way of depicting. thank you. loved your poem very much. dont be afraid that you dont know eng. lit. simply write what comes out of your mind. God bless you. tony
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  • (9/10/2015 5:40:00 PM)

    Still shedding tears for this innocent little child as I read all three of your poems, your heart speaks the truth and touches each of us through your poem. Thank you again for sharing and letting the world know about little Aylan, he will be remembered now forever because you spoke your heart to all. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (9/7/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    This event hurt my heart and your poem touched my soul. Thanks, Fatemeh (Report) Reply

    Fatemeh Tarkashvand (7/24/2016 2:49:00 AM)

    Thanks a milion Dear Denis. Sometimes just some words can bring soul to body again. They are such green memories that have long lasting effect on sule and even on daily life. Your comments work very well. Thanks againg. I wish a world that we can come up togeather by talking and encureging eachother. The end of war is nothing but disaster.

    Denis Mair (7/22/2016 4:55:00 AM)

    I don't know how I missed Fatemeh's poem about Aylan earlier. I saw it for the first time today. I am surprised that this powerful piece is Fatemeh's first poem. Fatemeh mentions in her response that Kelly Kurt made the first comment, and it helped to motivate her.
    What a coincidence! I was also made to feel welcome on PoemHunter by Kelly Kurt when he wrote the first comment to RIDDLES IN GREEN, which was the first poem I posted!
    I found out later that I can relate to Fatemeh's way of expressing things.
    We are still making guns for killing./ This is a very simple sentence, but in this context it speaks volumes. Apologies are due to the innocent young child due to a host of wrongs that led up to his death, Who will make the apology? The tender hearted poet stands forth to utter the apology that should be spoken by all of us.

    Fatemeh Tarkashvand (12/24/2015 9:25:00 AM)

    Thanks alot dear Kelly this is my first poem and you are the dearest first poet that encourage me to go on more motivated

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 7, 2015

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