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Artficial Chatter

Rating: 5.0

HIS words were rusty,
his life standing behind
old, there was artficial
chatter coming from out
side, and a dancing light
my room.

HIS hands break these locks,
his legs push and push, until
they find forward,

his eyes open, then close, then
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Ruby Root 20 July 2006

Hi David, you speak about bipolar a lot, this that because the mood you are in like kind of low. I was just wondering. Excellent poem lots of good emotion. Take care.

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Duncan Wyllie 17 July 2006

This is like a whirl-wind of emotion set on a stage, very profound and with deep feeling contained, thankyou once again David, I get so much from reading your works Love duncan X

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