As Beginner Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As Beginner

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I could hardly laugh
As stomach was half
Not filled with enough food
Hardly had I understood about

Some of the facts come to light
When there is nothing to fight
There is vacuum and void
That I hardly could an avoid

I had sensed it earlier
That love is like water
It can never stay in hand
You got to tackle it like friend

I was stagnated with artificial life
I wanted someone to be my partner or wife
I was confined to small pond
I wanted real feelings with bond

I am not scared of anything
But search reality in something
It was mere illusion
It added lot more confusion

If someone really asks for
I shall not hesitate even day longer
Only I should be satisfied
The feeling should be simplified

Anyhow I will watch it carefully
As it must work successfully
I should have my partner
To start with life as beginner

Tuesday, November 19, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: confusion,facts
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

It is good. Rylene Irvin2 minutes ago It is good Comment +1 like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Dominic Thattil3 minutes ago like it a lot :) Comment +1 a poem of always

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

Alan Green 'Guppyman'2 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a soul who strives for more

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 19 November 2013

I could hardly laugh As stomach was half

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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