john o'connell

Rookie (11.12.1949 / Limerick, Ireland)

As Children - Poem by john o'connell

as children
we played
spontaneously
together;
imagination
boundless.
there was
no time
to deliberate
and weigh
up one
another's
failings,
achievements
and possessions.
they had not
yet arrived.


Comments about As Children by john o'connell

  • (3/12/2010 11:37:00 AM)


    Wonderful! I wish we'd all the see the world more often like children, it would make the world such a better place!
    Love,
    Martine
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  • (2/21/2010 1:39:00 PM)


    simplicity conveys innocence so well. nice structure. (Report) Reply

  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (2/16/2010 6:10:00 PM)


    well narrate in a way.... nice poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 6, 2010



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