As Human Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As Human

Rating: 3.0


You are humble
When perfectly noble
Think of no ill will
And certainly never want to kill

You are honest
Only when you perform best
Serve the people
Take them out of trouble

You are adored
When fully awake and not snored
You are sensitive and alive
Committed fully for others to relive

You become impatient
When fail to be resilient
It is most needed
For advise to be heeded

What makes man perfect?
When he truly acts
Not unduly reacts
And believes on facts

No to any greed
Limited to only need
Such is symbol of great man
To be called individual as human

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

Edward WilkesLess than a minute ago What makes man perfect? When he truly acts Not unduly reacts And believes on facts This verse I have trouble with, for I am sure not a soul is perfect. I must still give you a 5star though! Comment 1 Comment0 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago near perfection for his at least noble action to think of acting right may be he shall not fight.... it is thought with right man 0 Perfect?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

Prafulla Sanghvi8 minutes ago Good Write Comment +1 great

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

Insan Lara13 minutes ago are we perfect..? ....good written Comment +1 Good Poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

Barbara Yeager8 minutes ago don' know if I a

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 August 2012

You are humble When perfectly noble

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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