Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

As Human - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

You are humble
When perfectly noble
Think of no ill will
And certainly never want to kill

You are honest
Only when you perform best
Serve the people
Take them out of trouble

You are adored
When fully awake and not snored
You are sensitive and alive
Committed fully for others to relive

You become impatient
When fail to be resilient
It is most needed
For advise to be heeded

What makes man perfect?
When he truly acts
Not unduly reacts
And believes on facts

No to any greed
Limited to only need
Such is symbol of great man
To be called individual as human


Comments about As Human by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 11:55:00 PM)


    Edward WilkesLess than a minute ago
    What makes man perfect?
    When he truly acts
    Not unduly reacts
    And believes on facts This verse I have trouble with, for I am sure not a soul is perfect. I must still give you a 5star though!
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    near perfection
    for his at least noble action
    to think of acting right
    may be he shall not fight.... it is thought with right man
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    Perfect?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 11:55:00 PM)


    Prafulla Sanghvi8 minutes ago
    Good Write
    Comment +1
    great
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 11:54:00 PM)


    Insan Lara13 minutes ago
    are we perfect..? ....good written
    Comment +1
    Good Poem
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 11:54:00 PM)


    Barbara Yeager8 minutes ago
    don' know if I a
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/31/2012 11:06:00 PM)


    You are humble
    When perfectly noble
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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012



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