As I Am The Candle In The Wind Comments

Stunning words of her admiration Falling like rain in summer to the plexus slaked When you do exist absolute unseen as yet known I am the candle in the wind exhausted beneath and beyond - - - - -A lovely poem with fine poetic expression !

subhendu ' I am the candle in the wind exhausted beneath and beyond' Yours self-denying burning it is not useless, my fine friend... Sincerely, Tsira

such beautiful poetic imagery! the rain and the wind 'go well' with the candle.

I enjoyed all the adjectives and participles.

yet another butiful piece of your thought........marvelously written and blended.....

lovely poem..well penned!

Eloquently beautiful work! Lilly :)

Very lovely, great write