as I close my eyes
as when retired by remorse
into the deep darkness
all the gestured images
...
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remarkably a very wonderful and great piece you have here, Dr. This is also a very deep one. Thanks for sharing, my friend. Love, Meggie
Dr. very beautiful and loved so much your way of write.............
Lovely work, it is so deep and very unique style of writing.
You bring the reader into your poem here, giving a feeling of serenity. This is an absolutely beautiful poem Dr. subhendu Kar. Melvina
well penned my friend, nice to read your new poem again.... best regards, Patrice
Filled with passion and realities that made our living on this world! Great verse! Perfect 10.
A beautiful and poignant poem Dr. Kar! ! Thank you for sharing! ! ! *10*! ! ! Best wishes Friend Thad
so lovingly said, well penned, and loving gentle flow of words! as if i was there..oh, this is nice piece.Thanks for sharing this one, Dr. Love, Meggie
A beautiful capturing intense feeling thankyou for sharing that moment Chris 10
very sad and beautiful.A very delicate form of melancholy.