Lorraine Bennike

As I Lie

As I lie on this bed alone I often wonder what has become of us.
Why do your warm kisses chill my bones and the touch of your hand turns my skin to stone.For you use to love me the one that I adore. As I lie on this bed alone your body beside me but your love is gone......... So I lie here alone

Poem Submitted: Friday, October 16, 2009
Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 21, 2009

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Comments about As I Lie by Lorraine Bennike

  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (11/23/2011 3:30:00 AM)

    oh what a write, very passionately curved upon rune of feeling yet mystique making reader to riffle at door snow of home,10+++, thanks dear Rain for sharing

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  • Nikunj Sharma (10/20/2009 2:10:00 AM)

    hey Lorra

    This one reflects pain and agony, well captured thru simple words........just watch for typos....nice sweet poem

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