Beyond Poem by Lorraine Bennike
Beyond
There are days our path won't cross but meet me
in the place beyond our thoughts where whispers
are loud and nightmares that inspires
Meet me in the place
beyond our dreams where hate believes that love is his
friend unaware of the fact that one will destroy the
other in the end
Meet me in the place
beyond our hearts where sadness dances with joy and fear is just
a word that use to drive the soul
beyond the place where you never been not knowing nor willing to leave
where being different is encouraged and coloring out of the lines is
expected
beyond the place of what your eyes can see where black isn't always
black and white can be green
There are days that we won''t speak but meet me in the place beyond our
dreams
hearts
thoughts
meet me outside the box
quitcool, nice page. keep writting............................................. ................................................. .................................kay
i think you have expressed your feelings in a very nice way.i like to be your friend.you are precious.thanks bye
A nice write.... Keep it up...10 ++... I would like you read my poem In the mid of the night depression you are killing me too... Naila
A good start with a nice poem, Lorraine. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
so far, by my standard, this is a great poem, written from your heart.And this is a lovely piece.You penned it well.An excellent job you have done here.
A most creative poem. This is very good. It also repeats the 'meet me ' portion. This is most memorable and takes the poem to another level. I cannot give it good marks for clarity and communication however. Good but not great. Greenwolfe 1962
heart wishful cajoled by the gleams of love dream seems to rave up by the art of the thoght rhythm when true never yet blemishes the blue soul yet razzles beyond the colours quantum...................yet luscious green by the passin........excellent write, i do admire,10/10, thanks for sharing ...................
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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My friend indeed it is a privilege to recognize this splendid work as unquestionably a 10! Brilliant thought process........thanks.