As I Make My Promises Comments

of love and belief yet angelic as you open the door of secrets love and care when sacred the friendship reasons to play making me stand to envy upon lest inspiring the legions ******************************* loved this lines sir..... and the poem on the whole is absolutely wonderful

Your drew me in with this here poem for sure! Giving you a 10. Always enjoying your poetry! Hugs, Linda

as revered by the faith of love, when blessed by the love of faith as you slowly descend to the mirth I disagree to disappear from your faith. The use of words 'faith of love' and 'love of faith' is very beautiful and appealing.The poem is very captivating. I disagree to disappear from your faith. These lines bring out a very different feeling, as if you have all the right on some one saying I refuse to go....and a faith that you ahve on love. Very absorbing piece.

when I seem to be befuddled / cohered by courage in conviction............... Nothing befuddling here, like clouds to the rain falling.. like Dr kar to swoon a girl with poetic beauty.. One peace at a time

as i make my promises, like clouds to the rain falling.....as revered by the faith....its a very nice deeply promised that made from the beauty of faith....never broken....i like it...thanks for sharing,

This is a very nice superb. its worth 10+ thanks for sharing, Patrice

Your opening line is especially effective. I love the interplay of clouds and rain. My applause, Dr. Kar. Warm regards, Sandra

A very touching write Dr Kar! thank you! (10) ! Thad