As I Razzle In Rain Poem by Dr subhendu kar

As I Razzle In Rain

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.the excellence of love
As I razzle in the rain
eye dazzles with tears
as it was fettered long.

When cowered by sadness
yet not lost but conquered
as love swayed again
like a fountain rolling
as tears dissolved in rain

when transcended
by tears to joy in unison,
like swaying of leaf
wetting my muse,

Sunday, October 21, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: rain,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Gall 10 November 2009

razzles in rain i love those words never heard them before 10

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Melvina Germain 28 October 2007

Precious love, pure and true weave it's way through this beautiful poem. A wonderful write Dr. Subhendu Kar.--Melvina--

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Ewigi Liebe 24 October 2007

genuine faith of love..share with...believe on....always concerning that enriched in everything utterance and knowledge of excellence of love. nice penned.

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Patrice James 22 October 2007

very excellence of love....muse purest in the highest place. thanks for sharing..

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Emancipation Planz 22 October 2007

Your muse has the purest H2O that is softened by a conditioner that falls from the highest place.... One Peace at a Time xx

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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