Friday, March 14, 2008

As I Remember The Rainbow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breath when sheathed by the web of ebbs
I still remember the rainbow by the blue moon
Your ripples when slither by the resonance
When you flossed into the moon
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Dr subhendu kar
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Vaibhav Shah 25 March 2008

A complex nature poem.Quite contrary to the feelings of WordsWorth when he says: 'My heart leaps up when I behold a rainbow in the sky' but really in a polished way, you have tried to recollect 'emotions in tranquility'.Excellent job.

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Coreena Dejesus 23 March 2008

I hope to one day have an ounce of the talent you have, beautiful powerful poem

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2008

You show us such beauty of language, the love comes through Thankyou for this Love duncan X

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Abha Sharma 19 March 2008

areally powerful work and definitly flawless

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Emancipation Planz 14 March 2008

Now here is a rainbow I could ride.... Subham, hope your week has seen the sun come out again for you, kindly Deana xx

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Tsira Goge 14 March 2008

subhendu, beauteous displayng a sinserity genuine feeling... thanks, Tsira

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