Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 389,843 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

As Life Nears - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

It is life cycle
We are helpless and unable
No say in ultimate end
To live with the world and befriend

Good work may be paid as life nears
Its destination and leaves only tears behind
Nothing to miss about your loss as it was open and frank
Everybody is in grief but pray the God and thank

You might have been good to people
You might proved your worth and be able
To deliver the work as promised
It might be hailed as achievement before you ceased

Not all get everything as desired in life
The life is full of challenge and also of strife
How you could do it is another aspect
This has only lead you to earn respect

Today people are laying wreath
It is great loss to them over your death
Not that there were no people of your caliber
But you were great success and hailed as climber

You were so close to their heart
This was no less achievement as an art
To get acclaim from people is a rare feat
People have to make great sacrifice and sweat

I evaluate this scene as one of most deserving and commendable
Your dreams have been realized and proved as sustainable
So far they were considered as unachievable and beyond human reach
You made it as reality as no one had promised as such

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Comments about As Life Nears by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • (5/3/2011 11:20:00 PM)


    It is life cycle
    We are helpless and unable
    No say in ultimate end
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2011 10:29:00 PM)


    I evaluate this scene as one of most deserving and commendable
    Your dreams have been realized and proved as sustainable
    So far they were considered as unachievable and beyond human reach
    You made it as reality as no one had promised as such
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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