Carissa Thiessen
Calgary, Ab
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As The Music Plays

Rating: 5.0
As the music plays
my heart aches
it aches with pain
pain of the past
and pain of the present

As the music plays
my heart aches
it aches with hurt
hurt that I have caused
and hurt that has been caused
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Josephine Adrian 28 March 2007
Wow! ! ! I LOVE this poem! ! ! About a thousand thoughs went through my head when I read the last stanza; I acutally read it over like 3 times. It's going on 'my poems' list for sure! ! Thank you. Josephine Adrian
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Alison Cassidy 15 February 2007
A beautiful evocative piece with a great structure and a lyrical soul. Very moving work. love, Allie xxxxxxx
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Tracie Brown 02 February 2007
BEAUTIFUL POEM. MAKES YOU WANT TO CRY.
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Jim Foulk 30 January 2007
beautiful. a very touching piece of well done poetry. it touches the heart real down deep, good write.
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Amr Alaa 30 January 2007
A great poem! I really got touched. Amr
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