As Woman In Her Man To See Poem by sallam yassin

As Woman In Her Man To See

Rating: 5.0


As a woman in her time odd or good in a man
She needy a complex
Of me but not crook
Which colors of all flowers creatively I contain
Flowers tranquilly lure that scents what she trace
So immense the honey then she holds in lips and the heart so deep sweet
Mostly I should be her man
As she dream
Caring and kindle
As a wisdom of ancient told me
To make her blossom
At the peak of hue grace
No niggle as a sister man
But be sweet
Talk to the soul
Don’t be timber
Her feeling talks
Through the eyes of her
And words make some time illusions
Pal
If u like the sea
So
Then woman’s secret
Hidden in deep to see
Don’t embrace the sea
If u don’t have the will
Or weak
Stay out
At beach
Watch
And Listen as the waves pass roar
Only if u have the courage
And the passion to see
Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine
reveal the beauty deepen
Sleeping in her soul go in dare
And see
So you win the pearl gift man
Out of bottom of sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 21 May 2013

reveal the beauty, good write, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

a beautifully written poem. so you win the pearl gift man out of bottom of sea.

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

a nice write. So you win the pear; gift man out of bottom of sea.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 May 2013

Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine / beautiful line this is the poem of great hope with slight disparity , confident so high based on emotion a lovely one.10

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Yasmin Khan 21 May 2013

so it's hard to win the pearl of love that rests deep down in heart-heart like an ocean, beautiful imagery and very emotional write

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Wahab Abdul 21 May 2013

a mind blowing and a cracking poem..in the following lines.. which ends the poem magnificently,100 / 10 ha ha.........Then woman’s secret Hidden in deep to see Don’t embrace the sea If u don’t have the will Or weak Stay out At beach Watch And Listen as the waves pass roar Only if u have the courage And the passion to see Seek the spring through her winter waiting you to shine reveal the beauty deepen Sleeping in her soul go in dare And see So you win the pearl gift man Out of bottom of sea

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sallam yassin

Hargeisa, Somaliland
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