As You Like Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

As You Like



You comment in restrained style
But do research in poetic field meanwhile
Do not find fault with poet or creation
That shall aggravate the situation

Lion may feel challenge to his kingdom
This has been witnessed seldom
No one so far pointed out flaw
You are the first person to show

Grammar part may cut no ice
Ignorance on your part may surprise
You will have hostile reaction
Not poet may fire with action

His gun is trained
To fire the shot and drain
"What you know about poetry"?
He may make his bullet chamber almost empty

If you are powerful enough
You return it with smile and laugh
You may politely point out error
The hostile soul may now cease to be terror

He too shall realize the importance
The readers are helpful in perseverance
Of poetic character
Else you shall be left alone as simple writer

Saturday, October 4, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 04 October 2014

You comment in restrained style But do research in poetic field meanwhile

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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