Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

As You Step Further - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

As you step further

As you step further
And in journey go far
You shall have third sense
To help you from becoming tense

Something takes deep down
To relieve and own
Some useful thoughts
And try to adopt

It takes time
But you succeed sometimes
Practice in real
And strongly feel

That changes behavior
Earns you some stand and honor
It altogether transforms
And from inside informs

People may call you sage
Inscribe achievement on page
Paint as reformer
And permanently remember

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2016 11:27:00 AM)


    welcome dashrath naik Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2016 11:27:00 AM)


    xDasharath Naik Xllent lines, sir Humble thanks. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 25 mins
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/9/2015 11:13:00 AM)


    As you step further

    As you step further
    And in journey go far
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 9, 2015



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