Ash And Smoke Poem by InkMe Abhi

Ash And Smoke

Rating: 5.0


Small, sturdy box of fire ignites your soul,

Deep black heads of those match sticks, eagerly

Waiting for a spark, turning themselves into tiny balls of fire;

With which you lit up the cigarette of your lover,

How beautifully they two kiss, in that moment of intense passion;

One burning itself out and other getting burnt,

After the game of desire gets over, what remains?

Only ash and smoke, lifeless yet so satisfying leftover isn't it!

Time halts, clock ticks and calmness comes,

Ever thought, which one is you? what will you be?

Be the grey ash or the grey smoke?

Similar yet not so near, near yet quite far,

You be the smoke then, i take the ash

You blow off, and rest in the lap of eternity, I pray,

While I be like the ignorant leaf somewhere down the streets of Montreal.

Friday, June 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fire,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rohan 10 April 2019

Wow.. So intense! I wish You could write more poetry.

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 June 2018

A good start with a nice poem, InkMe. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 01 June 2018

Lovely piece of poetry elegantly brought forth with clarity of thought and mind. Well conceived and nicely crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing Abhi and do remain enriched.

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Abhishek Pal 02 June 2018

Thank you! ! :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 June 2018

How beautifully they two kiss, in that moment of intense passion; fine romance.. intense love and passion..... thank u dear poet. tony

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Abhishek Pal 02 June 2018

Welcome Sir!

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