Monday, January 19, 2009

Aspic Goo

Rating: 5.0
I come with my senility in the cold of December
Listening to raindrops and whistling for the wind
I have become spineless, an aspic goo
Face plastered upon a limestone seawall
Nose, eyes and ears trickled like dripping clay
I talked to you with sticky, gooey throat
Pleading words loudly, unheeded and unheard
Like blustery gust on dried quivering twigs
Like a stray cat pussyfooting on bladed walks
Now a shape without form, a pallid tone
A portless odyssey, a motionless struggle

Charon met me at the banks of the river Styx
Crossing the stiles with ticket willingly paid
Think of me now as though not gone
But as a wretched and troubled soul
As a spineless man, an aspic goo
Eddie Roa
Excellently expressed and gushing with goo. Thanks for sharing.
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Simone Inez Harriman 21 January 2009
Enjoyed this one Ed.
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Vaibhav Pandey 20 January 2009
sir, this is brilliant work..... keep are very good
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Ying Escalona 20 January 2009
hello know Honda motorbike...i drive for almost a quarter of a century..and i see..the longer and farther i drive, the smoother it run...nice Ed...
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Joseph Poewhit 20 January 2009
Nice poem of man's frailty. People are all different and you captured the weaker side of man's nature.
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Naidz Ladia 20 January 2009
''listening to raindrops and whistling for the wind..''...observant to nature, thats u ed...ths poem reaches my spine...really good, , naizz
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Sameer Ahmed 20 January 2009
Very beautiful write with a polite theme. You have cloyed emotionalism in this poem very skilfully using good images.10/10.......... Best Regards..........Sameer
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Sathyanarayana M V S 20 January 2009
This poem adeqautely and eloquently exhibits ur maturity in age and as poet. Great piece.
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Juneil Sechico 20 January 2009
what a cold heart of a poet....this is a nice piece lolo...i love the imagery of this piece....
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Ted Sheridan 20 January 2009
Big Dan............................................
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