Friday, March 6, 2009

But, I Wanted To Sing –

Rating: 4.9
Sparrows in my mind
Scratching for ort
Stirring a host
Crowding in my bowels
Have the fireflies flown?
From a grumbling cavern
They fly up to
My uptight gullet
Pushing up bile
Tamped down
By peristalsis

Aach, what a sting!
But, I wanted to sing
Eddie Roa
Deva De Silva 18 March 2009
A smile and a bow to your poetic endow...
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Runett Nia Ebo 17 March 2009
This poem has a touch of irony but I like irony sometimes. Wanting to do one thing that turns into another can be disappointing but poetically, you handled it well.
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Eyan Desir 17 March 2009
Nice poetic flow 6 beats in every line
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Vaibhav Pandey 15 March 2009
sir I really enjoyed this poem, a very original and interesting piece of work...10
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Fidel Arcenas 14 March 2009
Excellent Ed. I love the twist.
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Noel Horlanda 13 March 2009
I digested it well but it was short. Anyway, t'was great, it helps my brain to exercise today.I need it.
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Sadiqullah Khan 13 March 2009
Great Eddie, Lovely write 10
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Marvin Brato 10 March 2009
E ven the birds d are sing d o it for fun i n expressions e ven if it is for yourself
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Melvin Banggollay 09 March 2009
A superb manifestation of your poetic inclination. thanks for sharing. melvin
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Ben Gieske 08 March 2009
Very original point of view and manner in expressing it.
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