Fallen Gods Poem by Eddie Roa

Fallen Gods

Rating: 4.1


Hey! I saw you
I told the breeze as he swooped
And lifted a lady’s skirt
With no one seeing us
But dust and a few scattering leaves
And a hobo amused at such a sport
And with a hiss the breeze
Timorously said, shh…shh

So, Zephyr back off!
You gods have lost your right
To bedevil mortal maidens
Prometheus had lost his fire
Achilles had athlete’s feet
Hercules went limp…aww!
Bacchus just another sot
And Zeus’ thunder went pfft!

The bra burning, hairy, tree huggers are past
Still the quest is to be as equal if not more
Battered, bypassed, patronized, even ignored
The Human Rights commissioner’s
Gavel struck hard at the shameful folly
These Olympians were once amused
The then dreaded divine elite, now
Meek as vestal virgins in the hearth

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Miriam Maia Padua 21 January 2009

wowwww....wonderful...and AMUSING..... .a touch of your own mythology... so captivating....10+++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 January 2009

Greek myths creeping in your hilarious modern poetry.Good job Eddie.

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Rivers' Baby Gurl ;) 21 January 2009

very nice job! ! ! i love it

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Naidz Ladia 21 January 2009

waitttttttttttttttt...are u talking bout girls? ...aha...... .UR SUCH AN INCURABLE ROMANTIC ED...HEHEHHEHEHEH naizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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Fiona Davidson 22 January 2009

Nice write Eddie...excellent funny way to look at it....thank you Fi

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Funny poem-good sense of humor-I wonder WHAT the GODS would say? ...hmmm a ten from me....

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cute.. and made me smile Krista

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Michael Gale 28 January 2009

Great poem with a hint or sprinkle of humor, filling in at all the right places, in the recipe of poetry. God bless poets, all-MJG.

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A humerous yet sobering pluralistic theology.Thanks for sharing.

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Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

I enjoyed reading this poem. It is well written and with a funny side lighter to read, but their is a truth to it which makes it even more worth reading.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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