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Astral Currents

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I miss the sky of days gone by
before the roar of aerosol sprays,
electronic noise from power arrays,
when trust was met in a stranger's eye.

If the stars disappeared, would I notice?
Our arrogant glare dispels the divine
shredding our trail with stinking decline
in our dark corner of the cosmos.

It's clear we're been pinned to the corkboard
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Rachel Butler 06 November 2009

'I miss the sky of days gone by' Rachel Ann Butler

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Ken E Hall 21 September 2009

Your astral currants realy start the thinking tank and it is clever piece of work, the aerosel tick with gasolene's breath helps with the march of global warming, enjoyed your verve++++10 regards

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Patti Masterman 19 September 2009

There's a lot to like in here. 'enlightened star travelers seeking the light within every random core', is a good starter. The title is a good magnet for the poem. I always head predictably for the same titles..(and with you, I am never disappointed) .

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