Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 700,515 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

At Each Step - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

At each stap

See the change
Manage well
It is good to adjust
And silently trust

If you find sun as non existent
And moon not present
In silvery night
Then consider you are not right

Nature always appeal
And make you feel
Natural and real
You should have good deal with nature

How can one living person
Remain unconcerned two seasons
When it is bringing tremendous change
To feel, at each age

You are pushing self to darkness
And brings no charm on face
Where as you were to feel nice with delight
And feel at each step very right

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Comments about At Each Step by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2016 2:12:00 AM)

    You look like 80, but you act like 18. LMFAO!
    35 minutes ago by Second Best to At each step
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2016 2:10:00 AM)

    write more, poetry is poetry.
    35 minutes ago by Second Best to At each step
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2016 2:10:00 AM)

    by Second Best to At each step
    You look like 80, but you act like 18. LMFAO!
    35 minutes ago by Second Best to At each step
    See, I'm the Second Best. But I don't brag about it. I don't boast my skills. You praised yourself a lot in your bio like you got this, you got that. you are this, you are that. that's boring.
    36 minutes ago
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/29/2016 2:09:00 AM)

    But why you wanna do that? To make others feel like 'OMG! He's so great. He has got fans all over the websites'.
    38 minutes ago by Second Best to At each step
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2016 5:32:00 PM)

    Second Best
    xYou write comment for your own poem. That's disgusting. You seem like a drama queen.
    5 hours ago by Second Best | Reply
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    x it is received against poem elsewhere and not commented upon by myself
    today by hasmukh amathalal
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2016 5:32:00 PM)

    welcome monika gul hilal Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now
    6 hours ago
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2016 5:30:00 PM)

    You are pushing self to darkness
    And brings no charm on face
    Where as you were to feel nice with delight
    And feel at each step very right
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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 28, 2016

Poem Edited: Tuesday, March 29, 2016


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