Saturday, April 4, 2009

At First Sight Comments

Rating: 5.0

Here meets the blind date with her
A stumble upon at the crossroad near

Slowly deepens the meeting of hearts
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Moushumi moushumi
COMMENTS
Sarwar Chowdhury 23 June 2009

compact beautiful composition! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 10 April 2009

gamble or gamble not...it's all blind game...good write, Mousumi...thanks...10

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Lynda Robson 04 April 2009

Good flow and content, an enjoyable read Mousumi 10 Lynda xx

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Catrina Heart 04 April 2009

Such an interesting and moving piece written with fine rhymes and rhythm....nicelly penned...10

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Muhammad Ali 04 April 2009

beautiful touch mousumi ray well done 10

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