I tell myself you didn’t hurt me
I tell myself I’m cool
I even think I’m fine
But I know none of its true.
I tell myself to hate you
Because you made my heart ache
I tell myself it doesn’t matter
Because it was all fake.
Fake from the beginning
Yea, the very start
So fake it’s hard to admit
All the pain in my heart.
I tell myself it was phony
I say it was never true
All to try to hide the fact that
I only think of you.
I think of you everyday day
Can’t seem to get you off my mind
Everything reminds me of you
Reminds me of all the good times
Yet I still tell myself you didn’t hurt me
I tell myself I’m cool
I even think fine
But I know none of its true.
i really dont like this because its more of a ramble about your feelings instead of somehtign with any meaning to it.
Aww remins me of me at one point of time not too long ago. great poem touching aching. Lylyanna
wow! i love this on! It's something that I've felt but could never express as well as you just did! Great stuff! ! !
hmm i wasnt aware poems had to even rhyme let alone have the same rrhythm. but thanks i appreciate ur comment..
Not Bad, if you work on the sytax like how Its supposed to bound from one line to the next it would be great. Like Ryhem one Blah Ryhem two Blah Something like that
first to the other person who commented if u want to leave a comment better be a gd one this poem is great i like it very much and a poem is a ball of feelings and feelings are never meaningless keep on writing your poems have a unique rhym ok too much talk just great poem: D
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hey.. this i like this 1 tooo <3...10/10