Thursday, May 28, 2020

At Nigel Dam (Free Verse Sonnet) Comments

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(after Cornelius van der Merwe)

It's icy cold at the dam and you are fully woman
where a cloud of fog like a smoke cloud hang chilly,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 May 2020

You shiver from the cold water when you set the fish free but fish feels the freedom inside water for lovable living. This poem is very amazingly and brilliantly penned.

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Gert Strydom

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