At The Coffee Shop Poem by abhi ramy

At The Coffee Shop

Rating: 5.0


I met you opposite to my seat;
You were in a black suit.
I ordered a coffee;
And you, a tea.
I put the coffee into my lips
While you left the tea with a tips.
I found that you have a problam;
I don't know who you are;
But my heart said 'FOLLOW HIM'
And i did.
I saw you entering into the death stones;
You lied inside a coffin;
I saw the name in the stone
Above your head.
It was you my Friend! !
You remained me that you still love me
And remember me.
That day in the 'COFFEE SHOP'........

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
a friend never forgets u at any time and any cause.. so dont loose ur frnz..
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Abhi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Zubiya Surti 15 June 2012

A meaningful poem in an inquisitive way.

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Zubiya Surti 15 June 2012

Ah! nice day at the coffee shop.a meaningful poem with an important message.

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Shihabudheen K J 15 June 2012

a different built up......nice narration

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