Friday, June 15, 2012

At The Coffee Shop Comments

Rating: 5.0

I met you opposite to my seat;
You were in a black suit.
I ordered a coffee;
And you, a tea.
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abhi ramy
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Abhi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Zubiya Surti 15 June 2012

A meaningful poem in an inquisitive way.

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Zubiya Surti 15 June 2012

Ah! nice day at the coffee shop.a meaningful poem with an important message.

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Shihabudheen K J 15 June 2012

a different built up......nice narration

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