At Your Fishing Rod Poem by Liza Sud

At Your Fishing Rod

Now you got me at your fishing rod,
And by you at a spoon-bait I am caught.
And to stay with you just for a minute -
Better dreams for today I have not.

No, there is one dream - the revelation,
a saint face I was so blessed to see.
may be time with you is a redemption
of my past where I had a great sin.


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я теперь у тебя как на удочке,
ты поймала меня на блесну.
задержаться с тобой на минуточку-
я о большем мечтать не могу.

Нет, могу еще - то откровение,
созерцанье святого лица.
может, время с тобой - искупление
в моем прошлом большого греха.

Wednesday, April 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: religious
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 29 April 2016

MAYBE TIME WITH YOU IS A REDEMPTION / OF MY PAST WHERE I HAD A GREAT SIN. Wow! I love these two lines. They express love to the Nth degree. They link past and present into a wholeness of salvation. Of course, the preceding six lines are necessary to set up this combination of confession and triumph.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 April 2016

At a spoon-bait! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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