Athena Poem by Jay Bradley

Athena

Rating: 4.5


I can't forget the song of yesterday, her eyes,
Never to be seen by mine, wont yet shalln't define,
Blessed Athena perched, mayhap a serpent in twine,
Blisters her hair in shine, ember as the flame cries;

Memoria I see her, ponder I the name,
To pray Athena a gift, dampened by the rain,
Her ancient mask not defaced, hides away the pain,
Never to be saved again, I the one to blame;

Such misty air repletes her, mountain peaks do glow,
When snowy robes complete her, siren on the shore,
Who snickers silent secrets, cause of man's deplore,
Born of split-mind Athena, friendly forlorn foe;

My vision blurs as tides consume the sand of time,
No wave obscures Athena, sealed by stone and lime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 17 September 2011

Great song sung by you in Athena`s vespered twilight...great tribute to the history and its statistics what it unfolds for you the verses u have jotted here.Absolutely mindblowing synaptic write as hymns to the sea leading to Athena

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Jhanessa Aiden 14 September 2011

words are used much in a figurative sense... what a gift...

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Johann Mitterhauser 13 September 2011

i liked the strong structure! ! good job!

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