Australia - The Sun Is Setting Poem by Paul Warren

Australia - The Sun Is Setting

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The sun is setting in the distance of a yellow glowing day
The heat of the sunlight has been beating down as it held its sway
The dying embers of the waning disc sink below the horizon
The light dances in colours of a violet, red, yellow and brown song
The overpowering energy of the dying sun has been lost again
The night holds sway as the earth sleeps awaiting the sun as its friend.

© Paul Warren Poetry

Saturday, December 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: my country
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The setting sun on a very hot day.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 05 December 2015

The dying embers of the waning disc sink below the horizon The light dances in colours of a violet, red, yellow and brown song- nice flow of rhythm, beautiful work, thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2015

Sun is setting in the distance and this imagery is very fantastically presented here with amazing sense. Wisely drafted poem shared with reality.10

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Paul Warren

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ADELAIDE, SOUTH AUSTRALIA
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