Thursday, April 9, 2015

Autumn Leaves Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I see the autumn leaves plucked
And my drooping friends drop one by one
I too would love to be sucked – Into
That unknown voyage from where they have never returned.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Hazel Durham 12 April 2015

Beautiful write with lovely imagery!

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Mihaela Pirjol 11 April 2015

The melancholic tone of this poem is really touchy - a reminder of our transient life.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 10 April 2015

Do continue to tweet sweet bird So we enjoy amidst All the autumn leaves that fall In the yards outside our halls (10)

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Valsa George 09 April 2015

You are still a 'fledgling bird'! Not yet time to leave the nest.......! A beautiful write.... the last quatrain, a real icing on the cake!

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