Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Gold Star - 16,112 Points (July 12,1952 / New York City)

Autumn Treasure Haiku - Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Autumn leaves falling

creating a brown carpet

mushrooms spring upwards

Comments about Autumn Treasure Haiku by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

  • (6/8/2009 1:16:00 AM)

    They say the awe of nature is reflected in Haiku. You have succeeded so well, the falling and upwards motion and the brown carpet paint a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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  • (3/24/2009 4:20:00 PM)

    I like this poem very much! It reminds me of the delights and observations of children. (Report) Reply

  • (1/28/2009 7:52:00 AM)

    glints of hope skittering across that brown carpet
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/25/2009 10:15:00 PM)

    A wonderful haiku.... A real autumn treasure.
    ' Autumn leaves falling ' and ' Mushrooms spring upward '..... A beautiful contrast....10/10.
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  • (1/17/2009 10:52:00 AM)

    Hello my Haiku Poet...another good one! 10....Ah! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, January 17, 2009

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