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Autumn leaves falling

creating a brown carpet

mushrooms spring upwards

Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Saturday, January 17, 2009

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,leaves,spring

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Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . 08 June 2009

They say the awe of nature is reflected in Haiku. You have succeeded so well, the falling and upwards motion and the brown carpet paint a beautiful picture in my mind. 10 Karin Anderson

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A 1 24 March 2009

I like this poem very much! It reminds me of the delights and observations of children.

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Chitra - 28 January 2009

glints of hope skittering across that brown carpet wonderful

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 25 January 2009

A wonderful haiku.... A real autumn treasure. ' Autumn leaves falling ' and ' Mushrooms spring upward '..... A beautiful contrast....10/10. Regards Naseer

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A Poet Who Loves To Sing Alves 17 January 2009

Hello my Haiku Poet...another good one! 10....Ah!

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