Sonnet: To Love (Correct Version) Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

Sonnet: To Love (Correct Version)

Rating: 4.5


Love's soft kiss as heavenly wine
Leaves the glow in morning's ray
Engraved as yours and mine
Whispered secrets shared our day
Sweet our souls flower and chime
In promises kept to chance
We reach for somewhere in time
Embraced by a bewitching glance
For Venus mends or breaks hearts
'though flames enkindle our eyes
Eternity's magic touch imparts
And diamonds fade to azure sky
Upon the stars we cast our light
As clouds are chased by darkest night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 20 February 2019

Lorraine Margueritte, It is wonderful to see you rightfully honoured as Poem of the Day! Because PH originated in France, where Paris, the City of Love is located, I appreciate PH's continued commitment to promoting and showcasing Love, in a sort of extended Valentines Day! Your sonnet to love is a winner and garners a much-deserved 10!

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Sarah Persson 20 February 2019

Congratulations on POTD, a beautiful poem

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 February 2019

A wonderful poem of the day, dear Lorraine. Congrats for being chosen...10+++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 February 2019

soft kiss of love touches everything fairly mends the broken heart acutely ................makes the kingdom of eternity///

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Tom Allport 20 February 2019

A lovely descriptive write about the magic of love.....well written Lorraine.

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2019

And Congratulations on poem of the day! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 23 February 2019

Ever such beauty and sentiment this holds! .. Breathtaking! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so very many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...................+++++

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Khairul Ahsan 21 February 2019

'For Venus mends or breaks hearts' - so true! An excellent sonnet on love and its enigmatic effects. Congratulations on your poem's selection as the 'Member Poem of the Day'!

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Ratnakar Mandlik 20 February 2019

A marvelous account of the stamp of love and it's effect lingering through out the day in thoughts and actions in the aftermath. Congrats on the poem of the day.

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Kim Barney 20 February 2019

Very nice poem! Congrats for having it chosen as member poem of the day! Just wondering... if this is the Correct Version, do you have an Incorrect Version?

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