Fallen Too Far

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.autumnal.Release. - Poem by Fallen Too Far

Weak, torn branches sacrifice the last of their crimson
Yielding a puddle of rainbows, collapsed from the canopy
Overhead, leaving only a bleak bleached sky
Dotted with the occasional bird or irregular airplane and
Floating, tossing aimlessly between the eerie fingers
Of the lonesome tree-forms and rushing into the wind
Leaving only the smoke of summer and all it's memories


Comments about .autumnal.Release. by Fallen Too Far

  • (11/9/2008 8:41:00 AM)


    So expanded imagination! I wish I had such poetry as yours! Fallen too far..and yes, it did..I did for this poem! A favorite! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Emily Oldham (10/24/2008 11:19:00 AM)


    beautiful.... keep writing, thanks
    Athena

    *** words will change the world ***
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  • (1/29/2008 11:32:00 AM)


    I enjoyed this. It makes me think of camping out in late autumn by a fire, a little smoke in the air, a chill, and we see nature falling into slumber, autumn receding into winter. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 2, 2007

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 21, 2011


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