Do Not Cry, Loved One. The Earth Is Almost Over Poem by Fallen Too Far

Do Not Cry, Loved One. The Earth Is Almost Over

Rating: 4.8


upon the arrival of the blinding sun
the earth drops thankfully into a rapid darkness
descending into the orbit of another godless mindset
obscenely unaware of a moral genocide

bleeding wounds reduced to cut scenes
unecessary in comparison to exponentially more
than the mind can handle and thus intake
at a rapid fire of the mouth and deaden of the heart

hope cries from a mutilated world
trapped in a cage hammered of denial and lust
for another human's life, or the lack of it
as if that would be the answer.

Friday, October 24, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: lust,trapped,wounds
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 12 February 2018

A refined poetic imagination, F. T. F. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Min Sia 09 November 2008

A revelation! And a cry will be the only thing you can do. Neatly chosen words. This masterpiece is undefinable! ! A 10 from me definitely!

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Tia Maria 24 October 2008

Here, Here... a gentle reminder, for after all, it is not all about here... 10 : -)

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Egi David Perdana 24 October 2008

blinded sun, blinded sky, and blinded universe, I think is a protest song, commnet my colloboration protest song to warlords thanx and 10

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