Awaited Call Poem by Terence George Craddock (Spectral Images and Images Of Light)

Awaited Call

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Before ever we met
much did I perceive
for you revealed yourself
in thoughts and words.

When we karma cosmic met
when we were contemplative together.
Sometimes then on insightful occasion.
In quiet crystalline moments.

How could I not receptive see
heart attesting, true interior self,
for we talked, soft salient hours,
passed with decisive conversation.

Clouds parted at fleeting moments
light illuminating sweet sincere self.
Shone through momentarily. Perceptive
intuitive conceptualization. Was born.

Almost seen glimpsed felt, fleeting idolized soul,
words cannot articulate, cross, dimensional vision.
Clouds rarely part in cosmic veneration, with
revelation, comprehensive mind can envisage.


I no longer hear
soft sound of breathing
nor echo of her voice.
I am an empty vessel.
It shall take her sweet voice.
An eternity to fill to overflowing.

Until attainment I hunger
for sound of sensual words,
sweeter than siren haunting harp,
vibrant stirring windblown leaves,
or joyous song of sparkling brook.

‘Tis music of celestial choir.
I have longed constantly
for mute lost voice
to call ardent me
but you cry to me.
Only with sublime silent,
emptiness; of heartfelt soul.

I can not anymore remember
individual notes inscribing voice.
For in composed refined presence.
I am lost bewitched spellcast bound.
I embrace your serene spirit directly;
as it draws forth to join within my mind.


Copyright © Terence George Craddock

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 10 April 2010

‘…Until attainment I hunger /for sound of sensual words, /sweeter than siren haunting harp, vibrant stirring windblown leaves, /or joyous song of sparkling brook….’ This poem a bit ‘push-pull’ type to me…the lines quoted is the call of the day …right or wrong time will tell …but your poetic vibe is right.. Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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