Awaiting Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

Awaiting

Rating: 5.0


A still life
Being alive in space
Seeing through the mind
Gazing at the blank wall across
Comprehension is beyond this world
Understanding nothing but own melancholy
That resides in the abyss of emotion
Residual sentiments accumulate
A weight gaining inside
A still life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Meggie Gultiano 23 August 2007

great work of yours, again my friend.. hugs, Meggie

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Marci Made 13 August 2007

This is some great analogy you've got going on here. The title leads well into the content..Just great.! ! marci.xo. :) ~~~

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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