Marvin Brato Sr

Bronze Star - 2,900 Points (March 2,1960 / Davao City, Philippines)

Awaiting - Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

A still life
Being alive in space
Seeing through the mind
Gazing at the blank wall across
Comprehension is beyond this world
Understanding nothing but own melancholy
That resides in the abyss of emotion
Residual sentiments accumulate
A weight gaining inside
A still life.


Comments about Awaiting by Marvin Brato Sr

  • Meggie Gultiano (8/23/2007 7:22:00 AM)

    great work of yours, again my friend..

    hugs,
    Meggie
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  • Marci Made (8/13/2007 11:46:00 AM)

    This is some great analogy you've got going on here. The title leads well into the content..Just great.! ! marci.xo. :) ~~~ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 13, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, March 28, 2011


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