Poet of the River

Rookie - 10 Points (july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

Awake In My Sleep(Sad) - Poem by Poet of the River

In my bed I toss and turn.
My breathing is raged and coming fast.
In my chest a constant steady burn.
My mind is trapped in the past.
The pain is a lesson for me to learn.
But how much longer dose it have to last?


Comments about Awake In My Sleep(Sad) by Poet of the River

  • (3/1/2012 9:27:00 PM)


    LOVE the last two lines, a poetic epitaph (Report) Reply

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  • Scotty Dogg (12/28/2011 5:18:00 PM)


    Stormy, you keep coming up with good ones! I like it! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 23, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 19, 2012


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