Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Awkward Silence Tanka Comments

Rating: 5.0

three words
then an awkward silence
between us...
the woodpecker's knock
...
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Chen-ou Liu
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Spock The Vegan 25 November 2015

My first encounter with a Tanka. I wote some Haikus in my poem Seven Farm Haikus. I like the 5 lines better. I may have to try it. Nice job. Thanks

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M Asim Nehal 25 November 2015

And this silence speaks more than words....Superb tanka, I enjoyed it 10++

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