Baby I Miss You (Ode) Poem by Amitava Sur

Baby I Miss You (Ode)

Rating: 5.0


Baby - o' my love
I'm missing you now,
My loving baby,
I do miss you...
No more can I hug you now
Cannot hold nor kiss you,
I'm just missing you my love
Missing you throughout.


I float I sink
I live and die for you
Together so happy were we,
Making a heaven on earth -
We two!

I don't believe that you're not here
Cannot believe even
That without caressing you
Or not having your love
I'm to live completely alone! !

But now
I'm missing you only
I miss you, yes I miss you.

With an empty heart
And an empty mind,
My soul also
Does cry for you.

My beloved
O' my love -
Can you hear me crying?
I need you
But cannot have you
Cannot see you even,
I'm just missing you.
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Amitava (6.1.2016) 6-00 am

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Baby I Miss You (Ode)
Friday, January 8, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: loss
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 16 February 2017

Beautiful portrayal of mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, nicely brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Amitava.

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Roseann Shawiak 16 January 2016

Amitava, still like the original better, it had more substance and depth of feeling and emotion. This one is fine, but have to place it second. Feeling of solitude doesn't have the intensity the first one did! All in all you write very well! Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 15 January 2016

Verily, the feeling of solitude is well depicted

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