Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 22,161 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Baby I Miss You (Ode) - Poem by Amitava Sur

Baby - o' my love
I'm missing you now,
My loving baby,
I do miss you...
No more can I hug you now
Cannot hold nor kiss you,
I'm just missing you my love
Missing you throughout.


I float I sink
I live and die for you
Together so happy were we,
Making a heaven on earth -
We two!

I don't believe that you're not here
Cannot believe even
That without caressing you
Or not having your love
I'm to live completely alone! !

But now
I'm missing you only
I miss you, yes I miss you.

With an empty heart
And an empty mind,
My soul also
Does cry for you.

My beloved
O' my love -
Can you hear me crying?
I need you
But cannot have you
Cannot see you even,
I'm just missing you.
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Amitava (6.1.2016) 6-00 am

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Topic(s) of this poem: loss

Form: Ode


Comments about Baby I Miss You (Ode) by Amitava Sur

  • Chinedu Dike (2/16/2017 11:46:00 AM)


    Beautiful portrayal of mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss, nicely brought forth from the heart with insight. Thanks for sharing Amitava. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/16/2016 1:15:00 AM)


    Amitava, still like the original better, it had more substance and depth of feeling and emotion. This one is fine, but have to place it second. Feeling of solitude doesn't have the intensity the first one did! All in all you write very well! Thank you for sharing this one. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti (1/15/2016 8:04:00 PM)


    Verily, the feeling of solitude is well depicted (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 8, 2016

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 16, 2016


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