Barbed Wire Haiku Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Barbed Wire Haiku

Rating: 5.0


winter raindrops
along a strand of barbed wire -
visiting day

Selected Haiku,2014 Sharpening the Green Pencil Haiku Contest

Romanian Translation by Cristina Oprea

picuri de iarnă
pe un fir de sârmă ghimpată -
zi de vizita

Wednesday, March 2, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: prison,rain,winter
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 02 March 2016

loved the juxtaposition of winter raindrops along a strand of barbed wire - for me the final line was instantly visiting day weeps loved this 10+

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