Wednesday, March 2, 2016

Barbed Wire Haiku Comments

Rating: 5.0

winter raindrops
along a strand of barbed wire -
visiting day
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Chen-ou Liu
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Terry Craddock 02 March 2016

loved the juxtaposition of winter raindrops along a strand of barbed wire - for me the final line was instantly visiting day weeps loved this 10+

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