Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Bare Bricks, No Cement Comments

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Ponderous pious words can't play brick,
Nor wishy-washy words do the trick,
Talks, devoid of the will
Cannot walk on own still,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Akhtar Jawad 04 September 2019

Forming a group is easy but to do something that promotes the economy of the group is not so easy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 September 2019

Noted, Akhtar saab. thanks for reading it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 September 2019

Bare BRICKS but where's cement that can stick? ....nice related sentence that empowers the limerick with trust and humorous. Beautiful poem.. Thanks for sharing.

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Aniruddha Pathak 03 September 2019

Thanks you liked the ditty

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