Barter Poem by ritty patnaik

Barter



in life
all that you have given,
makes me lonely.
to greed, ,

in life what you took,
i i feel shy to tread
on layers of
soulful sighs.

so in this
barter of trading
you may have got something,
but i have lost all.
and yet i am happy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 28 June 2009

There are givers and takers in life, you seem to be a giver and that's the reason you anyway feel happy and content with bargain. A great lesson, that life is beyond measuring.

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