Battle Love Poem by anna E

Battle Love

Rating: 5.0


i love this one
hands abend a knee, battle love
cutting hair
I love this one, never will i let you go.
Enimie ty to take it away.
My eyes are flashing
Burning eyes, burning
Sounds comming out of this burning mouth.
My eyes now are gold.
Standing, but kneeling
Dead, lieing there
this last battle cry
I hug the one i love with a smile.
Battle Love

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 March 2010

Dead, lieing there this last battle cry I hug the one i love with a smile. Battle Love...being soldier, i know what the battle love is... beautifully craftd poem and it has touched my heart... i thoroughly loved it...10 read mine...i miss.... mary to marry... miss i miss u

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 12 January 2010

A bitter-sweet poem, nicely worded. Keep on writing. Best Wishes.

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Eyan Desir 03 January 2010

An interesting set of word well placed together

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Romeo Della Valle 03 January 2010

Very lovely, Anna, very sentimental, well penned, keep it up! 10+++

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